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Tuesday, December 8, 2009

without you

without your loveI could spend a longtime without thoughts of myself.


I could spend a hour without thoughts of my friends.


I could spend a day without the thoughts of my parents.


BUT,I couldn't spend one minute without the thoughts of you
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 9, 2009 at 8:07 AM

    poet must consists words which should raise der feelings 2 d peak.writng like dis vil nt be cald a poetry.it is cald proverbs r some sayings which we see every where.use different words.different style.dnt take it bad.u made a intiative.now make it perfect.den u vil be a star..youngstar

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  2. satishDecember 9, 2009 at 11:20 AM

    i hope u know the difference between proverbs and poetry.its k.i want your feed backs.i am in initial stage...definitely i consider it.thanx

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  3. Ashok Kumar. GDecember 11, 2009 at 4:10 AM

    I am nothing without you.....
    I am not happy without you ....
    Something is missed without you...

    I miss you dear but i love you ......

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  4. AnonymousDecember 11, 2009 at 10:12 PM

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