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Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Expressing love


YOU ARE THE DEEPEST IN MY HEART.

YOU ARE THE BRIGHTEST IN MY EYES.

YOU ARE THE SWEETEST ON MY LIPS.

YOU ARE THE BEST OF MY LIFE........

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10 comments:

  1. TabrezDecember 1, 2009 at 4:00 AM

    hello satish....
    your poetry is good..,short and simple
    But try to use some jargons in your poetry, which will be much more effective...
    ALL THE BEST :-)

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  2. satishDecember 1, 2009 at 4:02 AM

    thanq tabrez......

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  3. chinnuDecember 1, 2009 at 4:33 AM

    nice ra nuvvu keka

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  4. UnknownDecember 1, 2009 at 4:38 AM

    hiii...ur poetry is soo sweet and its very expressive..

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  5. UnknownDecember 1, 2009 at 4:49 AM

    i think u r not dat shy to express your love..........u r poetry is gud...

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  6. ashwiinDecember 1, 2009 at 4:55 AM

    well..good one.. try to continue this one ra ..

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  7. UnknownDecember 1, 2009 at 7:24 AM

    your poetry is simple and good

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  8. UnknownDecember 3, 2009 at 1:10 AM

    gud....i think u can do better
    try using metaphors

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  9. UnknownDecember 6, 2009 at 2:33 AM

    Satish ur poetry is heart-touchng.cary on lik ths make ur tides of poetry into waves and make an ocean al d best

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  10. Sowmya PachipentaDecember 6, 2009 at 6:17 AM

    Its awesome......feel is gud,try 2 post as many blogs as u can n hope u develop ur capabilities n communication skills......ALL THE VERY BEST !!!

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